hazel eyes

I like what you're trying to say, but some of it confused me. I had a bleeding heart While I was waking up I decided to start Hoping for the ...

This is very sweet and touching. It made me smile. However, The rhyme is mostly simple and somewhat forced. The lines are a bit long, and, in some places, it ...

It was good, but it could be better if you clean it up a bit. I did enjoy it, but i was also confused by it. Maybe it's just me, ...

I really liked this. Overall it was great. It gently trembles with a quake, Leaving soft ripples in its wake, These lines are the only thing I had a problem ...

I love this. I really understand what you're saying here. You're talking about how ignorant people are to the fact that so many had to die for freedom, right? It's ...

This is really good. I wish I could write like this. I did catch some things though. This has already gone too far. Creiha told herself and picked her skirts ...