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Re: Hoping for the best
I like what you're trying to say, but some of it confused me. I had a bleeding heart While I was waking up I decided to start Hoping for the ...
Aug 24, 2007 -
Re: "my Bitty"
This is very sweet and touching. It made me smile. However, The rhyme is mostly simple and somewhat forced. The lines are a bit long, and, in some places, it ...
Aug 23, 2007 -
Re: thoughts of ten days.
It was good, but it could be better if you clean it up a bit. I did enjoy it, but i was also confused by it. Maybe it's just me, ...
Aug 23, 2007 -
Re: A Single Rose on Water
I really liked this. Overall it was great. It gently trembles with a quake, Leaving soft ripples in its wake, These lines are the only thing I had a problem ...
Aug 23, 2007 -
Re: Requiem for a Massacre
I love this. I really understand what you're saying here. You're talking about how ignorant people are to the fact that so many had to die for freedom, right? It's ...
Aug 11, 2007 -
Re: Flames of Lecraesa: Chapter 1 (Sray-Valom)
This is really good. I wish I could write like this. I did catch some things though. This has already gone too far. Creiha told herself and picked her skirts ...
Jul 19, 2007
